Your headline "Get Data Products Right" is much more vague than the first sentence of your Show HN: "iko.ai offers real-time collaborative notebooks to train, track, deploy, and monitor models"

I would update both the title tag and that headline to be a condensed version of that sentence. I'd also suggest considering the buzzword "lifecycle" to merge write/deploy/track/monitor (test?): "Collaborative notebooks for your ML-model lifecycle".

Hi,

I submitted a Show HN here: https://news.ycombinator.com/item?id=28777589 after revamping the landing page. What do you think?

Thanks, boulos. (I considered sendig you a weird incident on GCP, by the way).

>Your headline "Get Data Products Right" is much more vague than the first sentence of your Show HN: "iko.ai offers real-time collaborative notebooks to train, track, deploy, and monitor models"

In the current draft, the headlie stays because it's the goal but the sentence "The machine learning platform for real world projects" is replaced by "Real-time collaborative notebooks to train, track, deploy, and monitor your machine learning models".

>I'd also suggest considering the buzzword "lifecycle" to merge write/deploy/track/monitor (test?): "Collaborative notebooks for your ML-model lifecycle".

I considered it, and even to use MLOps, but I'll postpone it for now. Every "validate-the-market" landing page claims "end-to-end lifecycle management no-code MLOps AI", therefore I wanted to be humble, thus specific in what this does for now.

The docs will also be improved and the "UX flow" as well to get the users unstuck from sign-in to job done smoothly. We won't look at making it pretty for now, though.

You're right in that the copywritig is vague. Maybe this helps: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xwPcPXAxT-nVimAiT2AWEIu9...