I am going to throw some unsolicited critique as well, to both your critique and the site.
Bemmu,
I do agree that the aesthetic of the site did not totally give me a lot of confidence. It does look a little amateurish. Seeing the pictures of the past shipments helped up the confidence and the YouTube videos did that as well. While I only watched one video, I think you could include more branding. Throw a 3 or 4 second blurb in the beginning with just your web address and tagline, and maybe a 15 or 30 second message at the end. These videos with show up for people who do Google searches Japanese candy. That's your target market. Also include a little about the service in the video description. I think you are missing an opportunity to be able to add unobtrusive advertising.
I'd slightly disagree with icushman's take on the logo, the photography and who the service is broadcast to. I think King's "claim" on the candy logo is fleeting and probably doesn't have must effect on a customer. The "man-of-the-people candy blog" guy is exactly the sort of person I would order something like this from. I have more confidence thinking this is legit if it is a candy aficionado behind it than someone who is in it for the business aspect. Also, I think that the anime/manga vibe of the cartoon is fine. I'd think that anyone who was turned off by that wouldn't have been interested in ordering Japanese candy to begin with.
Getting back to the web site, I'd say try to highlight the testimonials from other websites more. On first pass, I missed those at the top. Highlight them more, maybe run them across the page as is the trend these days. You also ask people to subscribe before they have seen anything of what the service is.
The "Are you still active?" section implies to me there was a problem. It makes it seem as if customers are asking you questions like, "Hey, it's been a while, am I going to get a box or what" or "You had an interruption in service, did you get back up and running again?"
Finally, maybe have a section for testimonials. Maybe even have your customers send a picture of themselves enjoying the box, preferably outside in a way which shows the different parts of the world you send to. It would speak a lot to legitimacy and even community.
Either way, congrats on passing the $10K MRR threshold, you are obviously doing a lot of things right. Cheers and best of luck!
I put that "are you still active" there, because sometimes when I visit older websites I wonder if they are still in operation. I guess I could show that more indirectly by just showing recent content.
Bemmu,
I do agree that the aesthetic of the site did not totally give me a lot of confidence. It does look a little amateurish. Seeing the pictures of the past shipments helped up the confidence and the YouTube videos did that as well. While I only watched one video, I think you could include more branding. Throw a 3 or 4 second blurb in the beginning with just your web address and tagline, and maybe a 15 or 30 second message at the end. These videos with show up for people who do Google searches Japanese candy. That's your target market. Also include a little about the service in the video description. I think you are missing an opportunity to be able to add unobtrusive advertising.
I'd slightly disagree with icushman's take on the logo, the photography and who the service is broadcast to. I think King's "claim" on the candy logo is fleeting and probably doesn't have must effect on a customer. The "man-of-the-people candy blog" guy is exactly the sort of person I would order something like this from. I have more confidence thinking this is legit if it is a candy aficionado behind it than someone who is in it for the business aspect. Also, I think that the anime/manga vibe of the cartoon is fine. I'd think that anyone who was turned off by that wouldn't have been interested in ordering Japanese candy to begin with.
Getting back to the web site, I'd say try to highlight the testimonials from other websites more. On first pass, I missed those at the top. Highlight them more, maybe run them across the page as is the trend these days. You also ask people to subscribe before they have seen anything of what the service is.
The "Are you still active?" section implies to me there was a problem. It makes it seem as if customers are asking you questions like, "Hey, it's been a while, am I going to get a box or what" or "You had an interruption in service, did you get back up and running again?"
Finally, maybe have a section for testimonials. Maybe even have your customers send a picture of themselves enjoying the box, preferably outside in a way which shows the different parts of the world you send to. It would speak a lot to legitimacy and even community.
Either way, congrats on passing the $10K MRR threshold, you are obviously doing a lot of things right. Cheers and best of luck!